Oh wonderful! I'm so glad you like her since I really struggled with getting her history down in the beginning. Yes, I sort of felt like I got the 'feel' you were going for in the atmosphere of the Rp and tried to make a character that would fit that, its hard to describe but I'm glad you think I got it right. I took quite a bit of inspiration from the way you wrote your character and the world building you've got going on, really encouraged me to kick up the detail. I'm also happy that the wingwalking thing worked out, I thought a weird talent like that would get her noticed, especially if she was already in the public eye as a performer. Oh, yes of course, somehow I must have confused the European crackdown on the Wolves and piracy in general with the cold war...though that still wouldn't fit timeline wise. Oh well, I must have just messed up, I've edited it now so that Madelief's uncle just suddenly shut the Kriesz's out and inexplicably stopped providing them with money. I have a few ideas for why but I figured that'd be best kept as a story development for later on in the Rp. I've also edited it to specify that Wolfgang allowed her to keep her plane, does the wording work for you? I intentionally wrote it from Madelief's perspective so its more her interpretation of events but if you had a specific reasoning as to why Wolfgang would allow her to keep the plane, I'd put that in. I haven't specified who taught her to fly yet, since you've both offered and I've made it to imply that she just sort of learned from everyone. Though I can see Gowia is shaping up his character to be the type that would take on a trainee pilot. I think there could be some interesting interactions there if Erik were to be viewed as something of a father figure during the first run of the Wolves, because obviously Madelief would be subconsciously open to that, having been away from her father for half of her life, but also conflicted if at times she felt like she was replacing him or something and that could carry on now that he's dead. Just brainstorming here.