Gowia, your character looks good so far. It looks like he'll fit in with the others well, I'm looking forward to learning more about his history. DancePants, I'm fine with the changes you've made. I'd probably say that Wolfgang would let her keep the plane because she had earned it by taking it in such a fashion, but I don't mind you writing it from Madelief's point of view so you can keep it as is. I'm also fine with you having Gowia's character having taught Medelief to fly. Hi there AmazinglyVivid, I like your character idea. I liked your initial idea that her and Wolfgang meet when he was in South America, she could have accompanied him and Arturo Vargas back to Europe and joined up with them again after they form the Wolves. I'd be glad to have you on board if you want to go ahead and post a CS.