Your character looks good to me AmazinglyVivid, I just wanted to clarify. Was the slave who was derogatory to your character supposed to be Wolfgang or was that a different person? It wasn't 100% clear. 

I did notice a few grammar mistakes but those are easily fixed and don't detract from what I think is an interesting character. 

I'm likely not going to be active on here for the rest of the day so if I don't reply for a while don't think I'm ignoring you. I'm going to start work on an intro post soon and I'll compile everyone's characters into the original post next to my own. After that we can get this game rolling.