[quote=AmazinglyVivid] I intentionally left it vague, because I was unsure if that event would prevent the later formation of their friendship. If you're fine with it being him, than it is, haha. I'll be editing the grammar mistakes as soon as I get home today. [/quote] I think I'd rather it not be Wolfgang who was originally derogatory towards her. He would certainly dislike any guard that was at the mine but he wouldn't specifically do so because they were a woman, he'd hate them all equally regardless of gender. I'm going to get started on the intro now, hopefully I'll be able to finish it and get it posted soonish. I look forward to writing with you all.