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Ahhhhh, so much goodness! Need to digest.

Also, don't peek! Still wrapping up.
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Yeep, I just reread that and realised what a wall of text it ended up being, my apologies! O_O take your time XD
(Wow, how did I spew that all out at like 7-8am? That coffee was better than I thought it'd be XD)

Also the dreaded s-n-o-w has begun over here and my Internet connection is already looking spotty, so if I vanish for a while.... xD hopefully it won't happen but if it gets heavy enough haha
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There we go! Finished!

Haha, yeah, that IS a lot. Will get you responses to that later today.

Also, finished my post and no worries on internet! Post whenever :)
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No worries haha, no rush take as long as you need to process it, we're in no hurry to finalise anything :P

Sweet, working on it now, bear with while I get it typed out as this may be a slightly long-ish one with a lot of talking as well ;w; XD
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Thankfully we have a three day weekend coming up, so I'll be able to sort through all that sometime when I'm being a potato xD

You know, I feel like our posts are just naturally lengthening out due to how MUCH ground we have to cover now! Like you pointed out earlier, it's so funny to look at our earlier posts and see how our characters/posts evolved over time. It's really cool to see! I mean, we started with a simple tale of revenge and it's become...well, so massive that we might need to get additional software just to hold all our info!

Edit: Wait, snow? So cool! I missed snow on our trip up to Washington, but I suppose not having to shovel it is more than worth not seeing it XD
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Ah yes, nothing better than a good old three day weekend! :P

They are! I look back at how teeny tiny our first posts were and I think "how did we ever manage to write that little?" I literally had such a chuckle last night reading Ari and Bol's first confrontation with each other because (as Ari will point out in my next post) they're like totally different people and if somebody had ever told them they'd end up being "best-friends-that-are-really-confused-about-their-feelings-for-each-other" in six to eight months time they would have gone "PAH! YEAH RIGHT, OVER MY DEAD BODY!" XD

Yeeep, snow .__. haha certainly not looking forward to having to shovel it if it settles and keeps on coming like they say it's going to on the weather report lol

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Good grief that felt like it took forever to write, but hopefully it sheds some light on some things! It was a tricky relationship dynamic to work out and I know it's probably not perfect but I did my best to try and plug up those plot holes haha XD

Left room for them to speak to Neta and some of the others in the next couple of posts since this one is long enough already XD
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Wow...Roan had it all mapped out. Make him come back! xD

I don't know how, but in some way, he'll have to show up again.

Gotcha! I'll have Neta say her goodbyes in my next post, so...well, it'll be long, too XD

Have a goodnight and don't get buried in the snow!
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If only he coulda seen the whole collapse of the Order coming and avoided killing her altogether D: (but I suppose there's something bittersweet in a way about it not always working out 100%, *cough*and sometimes I just enjoy making my characters miserable mwahaha XD)

I will definitely take that into account and work it in somehow! He was a great character and I'm gonna miss him too much to not have him pop in to check up on them every now and again lol

Aaaahh, poor Neta! Don't make me cry! XD

I shall, and with any luck I won't do! :P You too!
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Right?! Part of the beauty of narrative is that everything SHOULDN'T go as planned for everyone.

Yes! Looking forward to seeing him pop up every so often and sigh in defeated protest at Yerbol and Aria's budding relationship(I would LOVE to see him appear before/at/around their wedding JUST so he could give Yerbol sass xD)

Posted! Expect Neta to come back on a few operations :)
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Oh my gosh, that's it, that is TOTALLY happening (something along the lines of "you darn well better treat her like a queen boy or I'll be your personal poltergeist for the rest of your life"! Kind of deal XD)

Yay! I'd miss her too much if not! Haha also omg Neta noooo I said don't make me cry gosh darnit woman! ;w; shall work on a response in the next hour or so when I get home :P (good news, I survived the snow!XD)
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Oh please yes. I'd love to write that scene out xD

Aw, Neta. I didn't expect to get so attached to her myself, but there she goes. Ugh. As I said before, she'll be back...I can't just leave her out forever!

Yay for surviving snow! A lot still on the ground or has it all melted?
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Haha we shall make it happen then when they get to that point lol

Haha funny how that happens with characters sometimes isn't it, they start off as just supporting cast and they just grow on you lol

Nah there wasn't too much that settled so like 90% is melted now (but the other 5% left is that horrible half-ice-half-slush stuff which is NOT so good :/ XD)
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There we are, that should be the last of the necessary farewells I think? ouo feel free to move them onwards in the next post, either to the memorial idea (they could leave a little etched stone somewhere on the moon nearby to Zinuthra on their way out perhaps?) or just get them moving on towards Taris, whatever works XD
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Gotcha! Do you want me to end my next post so that Ari can actually set the memorial up or just summarize the experience?

By the way, that bit about the dogs made me laugh. That's basically how dogs are, aren't they? xD

And I also appreciate how we won't have to write battle scenes for a bit! Wphew! Time to get leisurely and somewhat mushy, a refreshing change indeed
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Whatever feels best, I guess? I don't mind either way, I can roll with it! :P

Ahahaha, ikr! I based that on my personal experiences with the dogs I had as a kid. We had a massive German Shepherd who loved water so much we had to buy her her own kiddie pool to have in the yard at all times so she could jump in and go for a swim...UNTIL it got to bath time, then we literally had to wrestle her into it and get soaked ourselves in the process hahaha XD

Yes! As exciting and fun as writing fight scenes is, I confess I'm a sucker for the mushy stuff as well XD Will be nice to give them a chance to ACTUALLY relax for once :P
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It's weird seeing a post that short, but I wanted to make sure Aria was ok with Yerbol's idea. Feel free to modify as needed :)

I can get us to Taris if you want or you could get us there. Either way, next post is where we meet Yerbol's parents! :D
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Aww haha don't worry about it, it just looks so tiny because the past page or two have been made up of MASSIVE posts O.O XD No point in purple prosing just to make it longer after all :P

Aaaa yay! I'm so excited for that, you have no idea! I can't wait to meet them XD
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Slightly shorter one from my end as well, but wanted to leave it open for you to do your thing with introducing Yerbol's parents :)

Have a good weekend, too! :D
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Hey there! Have a day off, so will be posting later than normal (next 2 hours or so?)
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