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RPGC #10: Voting and Discussion!


Welcome back everyone!

Iโ€™ll keep this brief because we have a lot of entries โ€“ NINE OF THEM. Good job, people, this is I think the best showing weโ€™ve had since 1 and 2, and I look forward to reading what masterpieces youโ€™ve created for us!

By now youโ€™re all old pros at this, right? Votes are due at objective midnight on the 26th โ€“ results will be posted on the 27th (Sometime in the morning, theoretically). To cast your vote, tag our vote bot account @vote in your message. As in: โ€œI @vote for entry x!โ€

Now, without further ado, the entries!







HOLD UP A MINUTE! THAT'S NOT ALL THE ENTRIES! Scroll down to the next post to see the rest of these fabulous pieces of writing!
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(Woo, and I didn't even get ninja'd! Here's the rest of 'em!)




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All in all, a good review. Thanks for reading our story.
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Here's my thoughts on the entries. Do keep in mind that what I think isn't world-crushing extremely correct irrefutable truth of the universe. Just a guy who knows how he likes his stories, and you totally don't have to please him if you know better. Haha.

I'm just going to go ahead and read the second page first. Seems easier.






Now then.




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Well, time to review.


Green Moon

Not going to cover our own story here.









Princess of the Moon

Poems. Not our forte. Sorry.




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Thanks for a thorough review and for reading.
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Responses - - - We Had A Name For It, Once.

This is my first go, so I'm not ready to review anything yet. But I will cast a vote!







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Thank you for your review! I was aiming for a fairytale-like poem, so calling it cute and adorable definitely made me smile.
I have to say I was able to read it out loud, but I think I read it with a certain rhythm in my mind, or maybe melody is the better word, and that is very hard to convey with just the text.
Sentences 4, 15 and 31 were indeed sentences I struggled with. The others not so much, but re-reading them I can see why you picked them out. Especially sentence 4 is one I wasn't really happy about, but it was the best I could come up with that fit with the flow of the poem in my head.

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I'm so sad I can only add one Thank for the post. So here is it again. Thank you! Hug me? I want to hug you for that wonderful review! It's tricky to find a good rhythm or melody for a poem and even if you find one it's never certain the reader will read it the same way. I'm so glad you did. I recall you mentioned you could sing my Ode to king Han in your review of that poem, and yes, in my head the poems have a certain melody.

@Silver the only entry I read so far is yours, it was short enough to read through quickly before I had to do other things again and I just wanted to say it's great.

I hope I'll find the time to read through everything before the deadline. I'll do my best.

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thanks so much to everyone who's reviewed mine so far (uposatha)! going into this i knew mine was going to be kinda weird and obscure, but i find myself proud of it nonetheless. that said, your critiques are definitely being heard. honestly i was going to wait to do this until after the review/voting period was over, but what the hell.

my story is meant to be a broad (lol very broad) reimagining of the moon rabbit legend. whether or not this sheds light on it or answers some questions is a whole other story, but hopefully it can provide at least a bit of context to those who are confused. thanks again to everyone who took the time to read and review mine so far~
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Thanks for taking the time to review, @Vilageidiotx.

We threw all our review commentaries into hiders so as to not flood the thread as much here.
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Responses to reviews. Feel like this thread has been still enough to do that.





And now for... other things.


@Silver A short story is forgiven for being all text or it all being build-up for a twist if it's good enough! XD

@WiseDragonGirl Teh-heh. Acknowledged. You're welcome. Indeed, this read more like a song to me than it did a poem. I wonder if I'm doing that wrong, trying to sing any poem I come across? Am I supposed to just read poems, or... Yeah, no idea. So I sing them. Not sure if my melody was the same as yours, but I liked it. XD

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Last day of the voting period and I still haven't read all the entries >_< I'll do my utmost best to get the reading and voting done today.
How many votes do we even have now? 2? That's not much, is it?

@PlatinumSkinkI don't think there are set rules to read poems ^_^
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@vote

Goes to Selenophobia for the smooth grappling of theme and internal conflicts. Sometimes I may not have bought the dialogue, but in many moments you captured the weight of human fear, grief, paranoia, and the deep emptiness post-loss of someone extremely important. It never quite leaves you, and you nailed it not necessarily with dialogue but the silences. Very pleasant read, and there was a ton of competition here.

Wow, people. Y'ALL BETTER BECOME A NOVELIST AND I BEST BE SEEING YO NOVELS ON GOODREADS!
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Oh good, a tie-breaker vote. Because my vote would have made the situation even worse XD

My @vote goes to We had a name for it, once. I loved how the story unfolded, I was imagining how the people lived underground on the earth after some kind of disaster which took out a chunk of the moon too, waiting for the trees to return so they could live on the surface again and then 'bloody hell they live on the moon o_O'. The pacing was good. Shot, but strong. Yeah, I loved this entry.
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... Wow, okay. I somewhat expected there to be more activity here. Buuut nonetheless, four votes have been cast, which is enough, I suppose -- and I did say that results would be posted today when I woke up. So without further ado, I bring you the results of the popular vote for rpgc#10. The bonus categories are still being decided, and trophies will be awarded once @mdk-senpai gets back to civilization.




RPGC#10: The Moon! -- Voting Results


Winner: Selenophobia by @McHaggis!


Runners-up: We Had A Name For It, Once by @Silver and The Princess of the Moon by @WiseDragonGirl!


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I think this is the first vote I ever got for an entry, so I'm proud to see my name there as runner-up ^_^
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trophies will be awarded once @mdk-senpai gets back to civilization.


He's back, he's just surrounded by tiny children. Will review/discuss/etc. soon as I get a chance -- might be today, if I'm not too exhuasted to focus. In any case, CONGRATS to @McHaggis, @Silver, and @wisedragongirl, and of course to everyone who participated!
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@mdk Oh dear, don't get eaten.
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