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Hey cool kids

This is a bit of a weird one, more than likely, so just wanted to give it a shot. Just like everyone, I assume, when you listen to music videos you get an interesting movie going through your mind. With me, I get super powered type people fighting it out. Hopefully trying to bring it to life here for you all. Please feel free to critic as need be or let me know if this isn't the place for something like this. Just a suggestion from a friend on the site that enjoyed it so wanted to give it a shot and see if I could entertain you all.

The characters in this scene are described as follows:



Thanks to the CW, this is a decent representation of my character Chance. Chance's ability is similar to Spider man's spidey sense. If someone is going to do something that influences him in some way (throwing a punch at him, ect.) his mind races with scenarios on how to adjust the situation to his liking. It isn't so powerful as to see hours into the future but just moments



I envisioned her with pink hair, but the clothing style is what I was more going with here. This young lady is Dom. Her power is credited to Poison ivy's "attraction". She enjoys the company of other woman over men so will use your ability of "attraction" to get them to lust after her.



So the scene is this:
Limo pulls up slowly to the edge of the side walk. When the lady begins speaking Chance, donning a suit and tie comes out form the passenger door, walks to the rear of the vehicle, and opens the door to escort Dom out.
Chance at this point in time is portraying her body guard in order to get close to her.
As they start walking from the limo up the road she shoots glances at woman on the street and you can tell they are becoming slightly infatuated with her.
When "Trip, Trip, Trip..." comes back around they are now entering a lounge of sorts.
Chance leads her in as he scans the room lackadaisically.
Walking in you notice the bar is filled with all kinds dressed to the nines (ha that was a ryhme...okay I'm done)
Guys chalking pool cues, smoky, mobsters playing cards in the back corner while smoking cigars.
As they make their way to the back she glances from left to right taking girls seamlessly from their lovers.
She is currently grinning as she leads them to the VIP room that is normally for her.
She sits down with them as Chance takes up his post leaning against the entry way of the room.
This doesn't bode well with the "gentleman" at the bar
So as it builds to the next "trip, trip, trip"
They start sliding their brass knuckles on from their coats, bartender hands a bat to one of them, and you see a flash of a sawed off shotgun from one.
They make their way over to her, breezing past Chance, and look furious as the square up to her.
Once that "trip, trip, trip" ends and the gentleman begins rapping in the song
Chance puts his hand on one, they swing around and the fight begins
Chance puts that one down behind him by the force of his swing, using the mobster's momentum against him.
So a lot of flowing with the hits begins to happen as he slides punches off his shoulders, sweeps feet form under them and so on.
Once the "Player from a young age.." starts He begins walking down what seems like a gauntlet of them.
Player from a young age...the first lyrics he trips a guy up as he seamlessly walks forward
He recovers the bat from the next gentleman as he proceeds forward.
As that line ends, he hits another one across the legs sending him sky ward
Drops the bat
Grabs a sawed off shotgun from the other fellow
When "lord help me heal a hoe happens" he comes across a man on his knees, lowers the shotgun to him as though he was helping him repent, and unloads one shell. BOOM
Chaos now ensues as the patrons scramble to get out of the bar.
Bartender trying to keep everyone under control as he flies over the bar and proceeds after them.
During the scramble out, Chance squats real quick grabbing another shotgun round from the floor and placing it in his pocket.
As the last few leave the bar he pushes toward the door while lighting up a cigarette. His back still turned to Dom. The sawed off shotgun is now tucked under his left arm, barrel pointed rearward.
Dom comes up behind him to pat him on the back, in a way thanking him for his service.
He peaks to his side, has the shotgun ready to be loaded with a fresh shell, cocks it back into place.
"everyone just wants to turn the fuck up like" He unloads the second round in the shotgun into her stomach.
Dom gets blasted backwards, trying to stay on her feet as she cascades to the floor.
Chance spins on a dime as he walks up to her, straddling her body while standing above her as though he was death itself. With his other hand he grabs the Spade mask and puts it on his face.
As we pan out from the lounge, the bar has a swinging door going back and forth, upon the last "Trip"
The door swings once more to see a flash go off inside

That is it haha

Like I said, just stuff that goes on in my head when music plays. I hope you all enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoy seeing it in my head. Please let me know if you enjoyed it or not, I would appreciate it either way. Thank you for your time
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@Smileyjaws I did it haha. Critique away please.
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Dope. Btw, you're ripped damn haha.
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Amazing. :D I enjoyed this.
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I really appreciate it you guys
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