Hidden 7 yrs ago Post by Eklispe
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@Fancy Party Well you should add what technique he's using ^.^
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@Vec Why not post a WIP so we can check it out! I'd like to see it!

But if you're not alright with showing the unfinished product then that's alright too. :D


I would, but I'm in the process of writing out the History, and it's quite lengthy if I may say so. x)
I'll post the finished thing all at once when I'm done, so bear with me 〆(・∀・@).
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@Grueslayer I've assumed that Waidi is a continent. Please correct me if that's not the case so I can edit my cs accordingly.
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@Fancy PartyGood so far, choose a technique and add it to the CS section! Your Luck is 8.

@rocketrobie2I really like the portrait you chose, it looks classic. Your sheet passes! Also Blade Catch can work with your Katana as the ability to cut through other swords. 5 is your Luck

@VecYeah it's a large area around the size of Imperial China, probably a bit bigger. But there's no single empire that keeps things under control.

@sassy1085Need any suggestions or help?

The first IC will go up once Vec and Sassy finish their sheets. No pressure though guys; I'll also send PMs to the other people who expressed interest but haven't posted here yet.
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Whoops, thanks for reminding me. Fixed now.
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@Grueslayer Hey, is it ok for me to make up a kingdom? it'll be a medium sized kingdom on the northern parts of Waidi.
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@VecGo ahead.
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@Grueslayer OK, my CS is done I think. I have drawn inspiration from the various novels I read all the time, so I understand if you don't get some of the terms I use, so if you want something in more detail, please by all means ask. :)

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That thar is some nice formatting

tryhard ^.^
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Hey, you weren't lying about it being detailed! It looks great but you are missing a technique, and if you plan on using a sword you should note that as a possession.

Otherwise go ahead and add him to the CS section!

Meng Wu has a luck of 6.
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@Eklispe

My formatting brings all the boys to the yard,
And they're like
It's better than yours,
Damn right,
It's better than yours,
I can teach you,
But I have to charge

I know you want it,
The thing that makes me what the GM's go crazy for.
They lose their minds,
The way I write,
I think it's time

[Chorus x2]
La, la, la, la, la,
Warm it up.
La, la, la, la, la,
The GM's are waiting

[2x]
My formatting brings all the boys to the yard,
And they're like
It's better than yours,
Damn right,
It's better than yours,
I can teach you,
But I have to charge

I can see you're on it,
You want me to teach the techniques that freak these GM's,
It can't be bought,
Just know, thieves get caught,
Watch if you're smart

[Chorus 2x]
La, la, la, la, la,
Warm it up,
La, la, la, la, la,
The GM's are waiting,

[2x]
My formatting brings all the boys to the yard,
And they're like
It's better than yours,
Damn right,
It's better than yours,
I can teach you,
But I have to charge

Oh, once you get involved,
Everyone will look this way
So, you must maintain your poise,
Same time maintain your halo,
Just get the perfect blend,
Plus what you have within,
Then next his eyes are squint,
Then he's picked up your scent

[Chorus 2x]
La, la, la, la, la,
Warm it up,
La, la, la, la, la,
The GM's are waiting

[2x]
My formatting brings all the boys to the yard,
And they're like
It's better than yours,
Damn right,
It's better than yours,
I can teach you,
But I have to charge
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I can steal that format without paying a dime I'll have you know
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@Grueslayer Hehe, yeah. About that technique, I was wondering if I could add one of my own. It's quite simple actually.

I call it Empowerment. The user activates their internal strength/chi/qi/power anyway, and boosts their next attack. I don't know exact percentages, so I'll leave it to you to balance however you want.

If not, I guess I'll go with Displacement.
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I can steal that format without paying a dime I'll have you know


don'ttellanyonebutiactuallystolethattoohihi
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@Grueslayer Hehe, yeah. About that technique, I was wondering if I could add one of my own. It's quite simple actually.

I call it Empowerment. The user activates their internal strength/chi/qi/power anyway, and boosts their next attack. I don't know exact percentages, so I'll leave it to you to balance however you want.

If not, I guess I'll go with Displacement.


We can consider Empowerment to be like Detection in that it boosts your Chi, except Empowerment is stronger with the disadvantage that it only lasts a single round. That sound good?
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<Snipped quote by Vec>

We can consider Empowerment to be like Detection in that it boosts your Chi, except Empowerment is stronger with the disadvantage that it only lasts a single round. That sound good?


I can roll with that :)
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<Snipped quote by Grueslayer>

I can roll with that :)


kek
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@Grueslayer @Eklispe

Yeah, I had in mind a more of Active technique in Empowerment, where you choose when to activate it, and it boosts your next attack's power, with the drawback that it takes time to charge power once again. (i.e. round limit usage) Now that I read the technique's part better, I don't know if I should go with Empowerment in the end, since everyone will have passive techniques and mine will be active.
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@VecYou can always change your mind later or tweak it if it's bugging you. We're here to have fun so I don't think anyone would object to you doing that.
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You could make it more in line with other techniques where the techinque is simply acessing you "chi' or whatevs to let you preform feats of strength, occasional letting you strike harder, it'd be different than detection in that harder may not help, however it may also do more than detection in certain instances as well as let you do stuff like break down doors and punch through wooden pillars and what not.
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