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Deceit

By many, it is said that this is the trademark of the Sith. For Twenty-eight years, the Galactic Republic has been at war with the Sith Empire. Untold millions have died on both sides. Countless lives have fallen into ruin as worlds beyond count have been laid to waste. While most still support either the Republic, the Empire or smaller factions of their own, many are tired of the war. Many do not see the war as more than a religious conflict between the Jedi and the Sith.

Recently, the Sith Empire started gaining ground against the republic. This is one reason many, particularly within the ranks of the Jedi Order, suspected the deceit to come after the Sith Empire sued for peace. But no matter how expected the deceit was, no one in the entire republic had in their wildest thoughts imagined exactly what the Sith would do. It came as much as a shock to them as the wish for a peace negotiation did.

Even as the Peace talks were progressing on the neutral planet of Alderaan, A mandalorian warrior working for the empire disabled the Coruscanti defense grid. Shortly afterwards, long before anyone noticed the disabled defense grid, Darth Malgus, accompanied by fifty Sith Warriors, struck straight at the Jedi Temple. At the same time, a fleet of Imperial warships jumped into Coruscanti Orbit, immediately taking out the planet’s Holonet connections. To the greater galaxy, it was as if Coruscant simply disappeared. As the warships started their bombardment and took out what few defenses remained, they also set up blockades along all the hyperspace trade routes away from the planet.

Down in the Jedi temple, Darth Malgus and his warriors decimated the defenders, handily slaughtering them. This is all common knowledge now. What is not known is that not all the Jedi in the temple died. After the bulk of the defenders were taken out, the Sith spread throughout the temple, capturing countless Jedi and other persons of interest. Six hours later, the explosives placed throughout the Jedi Temple were detonated, killing all who remained within and burying the dead within the rubble.

The Jedi captives were taken onto ships in orbit, with the majority being detained upon the Kaggath, a warship/transport controlled by the enigmatic Darth Nyiss. Shortly afterwards, the ship departed from Coruscanti orbit, heading out along the Corellian run for destinations unknown.

The question is as such:
Which are you?
Prisoner, Rescuer or Captor? Jedi or Sith?





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Jump over to the IRC and show which path you will follow.
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Looks good and approved on my end.

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Got my character sheet in. Open to any comments or constructive criticisms people may have for the design. :)

Working off a tablet at the moment so can't IRC, sorry.
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Got my character sheet in. Open to any comments or constructive criticisms people may have for the design. :)

Working off a tablet at the moment so can't IRC, sorry.


Hun, could you please put it in the OoC, namely as it's not approved yet? I would like to use the CS tab for approved, which after we look it, CSes. It would also allow those who aim to make a CS know where to put theirs first.
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@Fallenreaper Sure, sorry for the faux pas.

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It's alright, happens to us all. No harm done and Thank you.
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Damnit Fallen, just damnit.

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Shes new you see. Doubt she would last that long elsewhere.
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Damnit Fallen, just damnit.

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Thank you Sep and got my approval when you get Myke's bits done. :p
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Shes new you see. Doubt she would last that long elsewhere.


We all have to start somewhere.
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Frettzo reporting for duty! A toast please, to the death of all Sith and Dark Side force users.

On another note, I stuck with Aftermath I's first-person style when writing sheets, I really loved doing it the first time.

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@Genni

There are a few points that feel wrong to us.

The nicknames seem… off… Something doesn’t feel “star wars-ey” about them.

The appearance and other basic details are ok. Nice explanation for tattoos.

When you refer to gaseous environments… Do you mean anything with a fairly normal atmosphere?

You put her as being grievously wounded, but had her brought to the temple for healing. In this era (3653 Before the Battle of Yavin), the best healers aren’t on Coruscant. They are found in the H’Ratth Academy, on the planet H’Ratth. Perhaps you had her first treated there, then brought to the temple for the final bits of recovery before redeployment?

You mention she’s not good at deflecting blaster bolts back, yet give her Force Deflection. That doesn’t exactly rhyme. We’d suggest having only the tutaminis there. The way tutaminis works, she could absorb the energy from blaster bolts into her body and either diffuse it or channel it away completely. For regular deflection, use the lightsaber. Its much more reliable.

we assume you mean “Glee Anselm” rather than “Glee Anslam”, as the latter doesn’t appear in the wiki.
Jedi recruiters are fairly effective and as such, planets fairly distant from the front lines while still deep in the republic would be skimmed frequently for jedi candidates. How old do you imagine her being when recruited?
As the galaxy is at war, the Jedi was not too strict on age for their recruits. Against the Sith, they needed numbers.

Recruits weren’t typically selected for a certain path of training, but they were often encouraged towards a path they were good at. If she showed aptitude for a guardian role, they would have encouraged her towards that.

When you reference ‘fly on the wind’ is that a figure of speech for force acrobatics? Or are you referencing actual levitation through the Force (which is an advanced and rare development of Telekinesis). If it’s just acrobatics, thats fine. We’d prefer not to see levitation in the game though, and if you were meaning that, going for just being a really good Force assisted acrobat would be advisable.

Failing the trials the first time is an interesting choice. Its nice to see someone not succeed on the first try.

I notice you mention Yoda and Anakin in your biography… Neither of them have been born yet, and won’t be for several thousand years. The RP is set just prior to the events of the game ‘Star Wars: The Old Republic’ 300 years after the events of the game ‘Star Wars: Knights of the Old Republic.’

Also as a note, romantic involvement is allowed in this era, though it is not taken lightly. Typically it requires council approval for serious relationships to continue though, so her actions in that area can stay the same.

Your secret seems ok and acceptable, as does having Battle Meditation.
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@Frettzo

There are a few points here too.
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Your listing of Force Capabilities is a bit scarce, especially considering her status as a Jedi Master. We were under the impression she was to have Psychometry as well?
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I specialize in the Ataru lightsaber form, though I also have a certain skill in Soresu, which I forced myself to learn after a fight with a Sith Lord in Tattooine.

How deeply inside the planet was Kinsa when she fought that Sith lord?
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There is a small numerical error in your sheet.

With Kinsa being 39 years old, the attack on the temple she was in at the age of 8 would have happened 31 years ago. Considering that the Sith returned to the Galactic scene 28 years ago, they could not possibly have attacked that temple three years earlier.

We see two options here.
Either you change her age at the time to at least 11, probably 12-13.
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You change the number and don’t make it clear who the attackers were. We don’t know of any Jedi academies destroyed around this time, but perhaps it could have been a far-ranging praxeum ship?

The best might actually be a combination of the two. Move her to a far-ranging praxeum ship that was attacked early on in the Great Galactic War. Only luck prevented its destruction and most of the Jedi on board it died.
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Also, space wasn’t a problem in the Jedi academies or the Jedi temple. Especially not with the war going on.
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Finally, the Jedi as a whole don’t think that they can destroy the Dark Side of the Force anymore than they can remove the laws of nature or such. They do wish to eradicate the Sith and all others who use it, but they can’t exactly destroy part of the Force. We’re pretty sure thats what you meant, right?
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