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this might be my last post tonight

my boss wants me in early tomorrow
Night everyone!

also any grammar or spelling corrections or suggestions would be welcome
kinda rusty/originally bad
Fixed
i think i watched the video and got it my head that is what happened QWQ
@Emuxe
Spino Straight TO THE FUCKEN action
i like it
i was kinda getting lost in the sauce

What should some areas or sections of hell look like? Ideas for me to possibly incorporate into the lore?

@FallenTrinity@Emuxe@Doc Doctor@Arkaotic@DJRaVeS@Vashonn


consider the fallowing....
Milo slowly turned around. "What are you all screaming about... I swear you people can't ha-...n..."
The first thing that he saw was Louise, who quickly devoured a bat. He recoiled in disgust as he attempted to comprehend what he had seen. He then slowly watched as Phil shape-shifted in front of his eyes.

"What the fuck!? Did I take fucken bath salts!?" He tried to stagger over to the others, but he felt dizzy.
"What the fuck did I take!?"

Panic began to set in as the others seemed to be dealing with their own problems. He suddenly felt the ring on his right hand tighten up. The smell of heat filled his nose as he looked around the cave. Milo felt more and more panicked as he attempted to rip the ring off. The ring slowly began to glow a low, dull gold. This gold turned into bright red as the ring heated up on his finger.

"NOT COOL!! GET THIS SHIT OFF!!"
The gold melted off of the ring, leaving only a black dark ring made of carbon. The gold burned and sheered away Milo's finger. The fumes filled the room with the smell of burning flesh. Milo screamed out in pain, and he began rolling around, not able to touch the molten metal. His consciousness began to fade under the incredible pain. With the sobriety of pain, he heard a voice speak to him calmly,
"It is for your greed that you shall be punished for your sins... All those you have corrupted and manipulated for personal gain shall burn in you forever...." It trailed off as the pain increased.

The gold crept up his hand and wrist, much more than was originally on the gold ring. The molten gold injected itself into Milo's skin. The dull glow could be seen tracing up his veins and arteries. His arm burned and melted, and the gold slowly hardening around his arm and hands, encasing it in a solid gold. Milo's eyes filled with tears, and he eventually passed out from the pain.
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"Is.... this hell?"

Milo's consciousness slowly came back to him. He looked up, only to see a massive demon snarling over him. The demon raised his massive arms in an attempt at crushing Milo. Milo, still dazed, could only raise his left arm, now completely plated in gold. The sudden pop of the demons bones as its arms collided with Milo's field was heard. The sound was quickly muffled out by Jake's killing spree.

Milo, now fully conscious, looked around, processing what he was seeing and hearing. A smile with a certain devilishness appeared on his face. The demon wailing in anger and pain attempted to kick Milo. The kick lifted him up and sent him flying over the others. The force was stopped by his field but was still strong enough to launch him.

"Shit, shit, SHIT, SHIT!!" He yelled as he tumbled in the air helplessly.
night,
i think it is time for bed aswell...
after some games... maybe... more rave raids
whenever i think Asura's wraith
youtube.com/watch?v=EzOU-UiJzPg
MICHIGAN!
1;53
gotta work at 11 am yaaay


i dont mind i get to re read your guys long THICK post

i might be feeling self conscious
i might wait until OP approves though
i dont want to be the only disfigured one
Myn is going to be more physical pain than mental
For in his drug induced mind he will become greed

physically fucked up

@Emuxe yellow it is
welp just realized everyone has a color... i tried switching it after i saw arka posting in green

and then @Emuxe already uses blue QWQ
is it ok if i use dark blue
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