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Sounds really interesting, I'm into it.
Hassan Tzenker trudged off the ship with numerous others, all of which seemed grateful to finally reach port, himself included. The gratefulness soon faded upon looking out at where the ship had truly taken them, Hassan knew that when he was conscripted it wouldn't be the most pleasant place or line of work. Yet it seemed that the universe had made sure that it would be hammered into all the passengers minds that where you are at now is a means to an end. Weather that be freedom, security, or a quick a death, just as long as this was the end, unfortunately this grim place was a shining beacon of "light", and there was far worse out there.

Whilst taking in his surroundings, Hassan could feel the weight of his sword on his back as though it was asking to be readied, which very well may be the case here. As the crowd continued along into a building that he would soon discover were the barracks, He noted the people around him, some were like him, here not of their own will but as a stepping stone to absolution. Others were soldiers some fresh-faced, with a varying looks on their faces, some anxious of their inevitable maiming, some fervent with the rush that they too would be in the fray soon. Hassan remained stone faced and stoic, standing tall and silent, it belied his inner anxiety of the whole situation but he knew letting it get the better of him now would only cause trouble later. As the large crowd entered the barracks a few groups scattered around an placed or picked up various personal effects, however small they may be a few trinkets, religious symbols, and other things that held meaning to them. Many stood and waited, made small talk to fellow soldiers which continued for a while and settled at a dull hum of overlapping conversations in a cramped area. After an all to brief amount of time the crowd was once again moving. In a courtyard the crowd stood in organized chaos, attempts at making rank a file lines were broken by every other person moving every few moments waiting for something to happen.

A man walked up to the podium at the end of the court, he was clearly a veteran of the misery of the new world. After a few short, harsh words that briefly detailed life here he was replaced by another man who began calling out various names in the crowd and assigning them to a higher ranking member of the expedition. In true military fashion names were called last name first, Hassan heard his called out along with a dozen others, and shortly there-after they were directed to a gruff, portly man with a missing eye. Hassan took this brief moment to observe his new companions. A small handful looked more than capable and ready to be indentured to this new life, and a few who would surely die. Sergeant Hoff was about as pleasant as he looked, he made a quick comment that caused a few members of the small group to grow concerned, but before any complaints, questions or any form of communication could be made he began to walk, beckoning the group to follow. After a short walk they were in front of an impressive wall and gate with numerous guards and patrolmen around it. Hoff gave them their assignment rather quickly and with little preparation, everyone there was as ready as they could be, weather they were actually ready or not.

It seemed as though Hassan's initial feelings of having to draw his sword at a moments notice had become reality he directed his gaze to Sergeant Hoff and let out a firm "Yes." He stood silently, waiting for the others to comply.
@BlackSam3091

Of cooourse, what's the worse that could happen?

(Note to self; quote this post when the worst things happen.)
@vietmyke
Thanks for the feedback!
I'll get on fixing those discrepancies right away.


Fixed some stuff.
This sounds wonderful, I'm not sure on your stance on things but I plan on getting a CS up for this sometime tonight or early tomorrow, would you prefer if I just edited this post or made a new one?
@Blizz

Nice, looking forward to getting to know more about it, I don't wanna jump down your throat but when can we expect to get an OOC and some more baseline stuff?
Double that, sounds like it has some sweet potential.
@Heat Oof, I couldn't get through the whole song, it was hard to listen to. 3/10 for me.



Dude's got a good voice, and the actual song has a good old gritty blues rock feel, but nothing spectacular, kinda sounds like a Levi's commercial or something.

feelin' a solid 5 to 6/10

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