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@Rockin Strings will be able to help me with my character. I'll join this. His is almost done.
I know I tried working on a different character before but RL got too busy and I have a better base character.

Name: Marcus D. Crowley AKA Raven

Age: 19

Gender: Male

Species: Mutant

World of Origin: Alternate Earth

Are you a member of TRIDENT? If so, what is your job/specialty? Eventually.

Are you one of those seemingly normal people? If so, what do you do? No.

Appearance: Marcus stand at 6'3" with an average but muscular build with short, spiky, black hair that appears almost feathery, silver eyes, and a pair of black, raven-like wings, which have dark purple feathers near the base and bottom edge. Each wing can extend at far as he is tall, with a 2 inch gap between the base of each wing, giving him a total wingspan of 12'8".

He wears a pair of black, denim cargo pants, no shirt, black biker boots with steel toes, black, fingerless gloves, and a black mask with purple (instead of white) and gold designs. Sheathed on his left hip he has a pair of black, wooden bokken.

Abilities and skills: He is proficient with flight, single wield katana style, cooking, some small handguns, write poems and short stories, video games, and has extremely good balance.

Strengths and Weaknesses: Being a young adult at top physical conditions, he is stronger, faster, and more hardy than most people. He cannot fly when his wings are too wet, can be killed as easily as a normal human, and his wings are extremely susceptible to flames, such as cloth or hair.

Equipment Requests: Pair of bokken, an amt hardballer, a ballester-molina.

History: Marcus was always a good kid growing up. But society didn't like mutants. He, his brother, and his sister were all born mutants. Him with wings. His brother could control the earth. His sister manipulated water all around her. Because of their mutations, all three children were kept hidden from the world while they were trained with various handguns. Marcus escaped from his country home to explore.

While on the run, Marcus found a small group of other mutants with various abilities and joined them, becoming a hero. While with them, they trained him on how to use a sword, as well as how to defend himself without one. The citizens seemed to love his deeds but hate him.

While on a job, he got sucked through the rift while examining it for an ally.

Personality: Marcus is a free spirit. He loves to have fun but not at the expense of others. He often tries to right the wrongs done against his friends but not against himself. He tries to be the hero everyone thinks he’s supposed to be. He’s hard to anger but will never back down from a fight. He’s very open-minded and open-mouthed, not afraid to speak his mind.
well at lest i trid and im sory that you are so controlling isint it sapostobe a fighting rp and you startid the drama
not me and you sem to be the only one with the problim and i wantid to be your frind im not mad just disapontid that you didint want to look past your self and exsept uther pepals limatashins and short cumings and im sory. i hoop you lernd sumthing about your self and me agin im sory
I'll jump on this bandwagon. I love Fallout games.
I'll jump in on this. Make a CS later. Only 1 question: how do you feel about someone who can manipulate plasma based energy?
Tommy, with his lunch and a Bram Stoker book in hand, sat at one of the back tables, not completely out of sight but still easy to miss. He heard the raucous laughter coming from not far away. With a sigh, he stood and walked over to the table, slamming the book down to grab their attention. "This is a library." he said softly. "Why don't you have some respect and quiet down?" He didn't wait for their reply before returning to his table. Not long after, he heard screams. Looking up, he saw what appeared to be a supervillain. Followed by the appearances of kids dressed like animal-based super heroes. In order, an eagle, an armadillo, a racoon, a spider, and a bear. It was easy for him to dodge the flying paper and tables. He hid behind a bookshelf and pulled Marrok from the jerky bag he had been hiding in. "Quit eating and tell me what to do."

Marrok looked up at him with a blank expression. "Transform."

"Oh, yeah." he said with a chuckle. "Marrok, fangs bared!"

Tommy, having yet to choose his hero name, examined himself and smiled. "Chains. That's a new weapon." Shrugging, he leapt into view, grabbing the Almaniac's free arm with one of his chains. "I think those kids are right." he said, pulling on the chain as he got closer. "Respect the library and the librarian. Do not make a mess. Do not destroy the books. And, most of all, don't make any loud noise." He swung his other chain to wrap around her waist and pull her to the floor. "Come on, Ms. O'neil. Calm down, let everyone go, and we can get back to a normal day."
Alright.
@Eyeris A single episode of Miraculous would explain everything.


Bel, you're not helping.

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Hey. I'd love for you to play with us. The character sheet is juts confusing me. The idea isn't clear to me.

If so, what is the Item? The spirit can hide in a bag of jerky? So it is outside the item? What does it look like if it is outside the item? What IS the item. How does this transformation thing work?

So he flips between being tommy and 'silver fanng'...?

Falling stars seems overpowered. 100 feet is a wide range. It does like 5 things at once.

I think i would like the character if i understood them better.


The Miraculous is his wristband. The Kwami is a physical being that is as small as a mouse. Silver Fang is the name he uses when he's transformed. He can only use Falling Stars once per transformation, after which he has five minutes before he changes back. Before he can transform again, he must feed his Kwami, whose info is at the bottom of the CS, and the little thing likes jerky which is why he's hiding in a leather satchel filled with deer jerky.
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So Kaze that's a nice first post, but I'm afraid you're 700 characters short of the 2,000 character limit. If you could brush up your post, that would be appreciated. :)

Rokku, you're also about 200 characters below. I put a 2,000 character limit which is about 3-4 wordy paragraphs. Since this is high casual.


Made an edit to mine. Rokku said he'd make his edit later.
It was a normal morning at first for Tommy. He'd done his exercises, had a good breakfast, and proceeded to check the morning paper. Beside the paper, however, was a small box. "Another gift from mom?" he asked, looking over. "No card this time?" He shrugged as he carried it inside. "That's not like her." he said, beginning to open the box. Suddenly a bright light shot a few feet in the air from the box before floating back down as what appeared to be a tiny wolf.

"Something tells me this isn't a gift from my mom." he said, eyeing the fairy thing.

"No clue." the thing said to him in a surprisingly deep voice. "I'm Marrok. Got anything to eat?"

"I got some deer jerky." Tommy said, offering him a small piece.

Marrok zipped through the air, grabbing the food from the boy's hand, and began munching on it loudly.

"So, what's this?" Tommy asked, picking up the other item from the box, a wristband.

"That's a Miraculous." Marrok said, looking at it. He then began explaining what a Miraculous was and what it did, stopping every so often to grab a piece of jerky to munch on.

"So, I just have to say that one thing?" Tommy asked, looking at it. "Whatever. Just stay close and stay hidden. I have to go to school."

Marrok shrugged and jumped in Tommy's coat pocket.

As Tommy arrived at school, being one of the first as usual, he took a seat by where he normally met his friends.

While waiting, he kept his eyes out on everyone that came his direction. About ten minutes after his best friend was supposed to arrive, everyone but him was there. "Hey, where's Eddie?" Tommy asked. Everyone looked around, shrugging. "Guess he's late." One boy replied, looking off towards the gate.
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