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@Alupi Sorry, i've been fairly busy until now today

As @Lucius Cypher mentions the problem isn't the scope of the ability it's more the scope of it compared to the drawbacks it faces. An example is that seeing as it's produced instead of her other bodily fluids, it could dehydrate her when she does it. Even something that simple would get a thumbs up from me, because otherwise its a very cool and sweeping ability that doesn't seem to have any direct drawback on your character.

It has potential to be pretty devastating (and personally it'd team up great with my character Tay imo) so don't give up on it, I'd just add something minor and manageable to give it a more quirk-esque feel, if you get what I mean?

One character with a creation quirk in canon uses her fat cells to create things, so it wouldn't be too out there to think hydration directly correlates to it.

@Lucius Cypher I have considered her vulnerability to her own attacks however it is clearly stated she can produce a substance that nullifies it, sort of cancelling it out as being a drawback.

The bottom line is quirks in this rp tend to have either a drawback in terms of a cap on how much you can use it for whatever reason or a cap on how strong it can be. Characters like mine, Marius, have almost like time limits where he gets into a hangover like state and can't focus, and other characters have limits on Range/strength etc.

HOWEVER

@Alupi From as soon as I started checking sheets from what you said you do have a point. I've spoken with @NightmareInd and I'm confident @olcharlieboi won't object to me putting out an announcement that everyone should clearly state their quirk's drawbacks and limits in the quirk section of their character sheets. People who already don't have this done, this is a priority before they start becoming more heavily used in the RP. If your quirk is just quite mundane in the first place, that's still a drawback in itself and must be clearly stated. If you think you have this already then that's ace.

I'm genuinely sorry if it seemed like you were being called out for things others were guilty of, and we hope it doesn't discourage you from the rp. If you like, hop into the RPG discord (link in the first OOC post) and join our #bnha_rp room where we have a live chat :) we discuss our characters and quirks a lot in there, it'd be nice for more friendly faces :D

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Interacting with @Kalas@KaijuBaragon mentioning @Kalas

He sat and listened to the conversation between Connor and Karma, looking Karma up and down as he did so. A fair bit of is personality had been revealed already, to which he took a mental note at the competitive side. Seeing Celestia fall as she entered he blinks, annoyed at himself for not sliding in with a smooth psychic catch. Even more to his annoyance, Dan had already swooped in to help pick up her things, to which he kicked himself again mentally for not doing a cool mid-air catch with his quirk.

Despite the all out battery he was giving a poor, miniature version of himself in his mind, he grinned a little as he examined Celestia. He took a mental note of Frin's personal anecdote, looking around the classroom once more in thought. Gaining a good understanding of people's proportions and physiology is always a plus in case he ever wanted to pick them up and throw them around a bit. His smile disappeared as he had a mental argument to himself over the morality of such a thought. He appeared lost, deep in thought, with a hand on his chin staring into space around the chalkboard.

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Interacting with @Heckno12@kidjab

Her eye twitched again as she appeared physically angry for a moment to the second breach of personal space. She exhaled once more slowly, flexing her hand outward from a fist that began to subconsciously curl.

"I don't know much about pro heroes, so I probably won't recognise whoever it is."

She appeared bored again, tapping the desk waiting for class to start impatiently. Upon seeing Celestia's... grand entrance, she glared in Marius' direction, mentally criticising his reaction times and apparent ineptitude as he could have prevented both her fall and the spillage of her stationary. She glanced around, gesturing an elbow like a nudge towards Yamerugo again

"I hope these aren't solid friend groups forming from the get go because I do not have the energy to worm my way into one."

"And I'd rather not get stuck with the helicopter space invader" she thought to herself, glancing again at Ensza

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@Alupi @olcharlieboi @NightmareInd

In a lecture atm but i gave it a look over, i second what nightmare said pretty much

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Interacting with @Kalas@KaijuBaragon

He smiled, looking up for a moment rather amused

"Huh, I didn't know we got given the rankings. Nice."

He seemed rather pleased with himself, looking forward to Frin, apparently the only person who bested him. He thought for a minute and a little figure of himself shrugged in his mind, a little wary of the apparent ego surrounding Karma. He was confused for a moment at the mention of a pretty boy, immediately associating this quip with himself mentally.

"Yeah, it'll be pretty neat."

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Interacting with @Heckno12@kidjab

"She better not."

She appeared a little agitated, sinking into her chair a little waiting for class to start.

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Interacting with @KaijuBaragon @Kalas

He looked around to Connor huffing a little

"Why does everyone here know my name?"

looking a little irate, not having actually checked the entrance exam scores beyond seeing he was accepted. This could have been out of some kind of modesty and self progression, but really it was because he got excited once he read he was accepted and forgot about everything else like a moron.

"Nice to meet you anyway, there isn't much to do until class starts except screw around."

He grinned at Momo's reaction to his note, nodding slowly at Karma's declaration, smirking still. He figured that meant he couldn't have taken the top spot, wondering who did. Nobody in his exam area appeared above the rest, then again his obliviousness to his own performance may be why it seemed that way.

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Interacting with @Kalas mentioned @Eklispe@Turboshitter

He'd smirk a little, raising one eyebrow as Enzsa announced her new love interests. he talked in a much lower voice now to Karma

"Invading Tay's personal space is not a good place to start for that girl. I dig the red hair though."

he examined the girl a fair bit, attempting to somewhat sum her up before his gaze wandered to Anagorm entering the room, grinning and moving to nudge Karma with his elbow slightly.

"We already have more cute girls than I'd hoped for and everyone isn't even here yet..."

He watched Makoto enter the room, thinking for a moment and examining her demeanour. He watched her sit and her attempted friendliness to the other kid, deciding not to change his previous statement, grinning back at Karma

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Interacting with @kidjab and @Heckno12

Her unamused expression sat blankly and met Enzsa's entire routine as she sat, enduring the immediate closeness. She noted her boyishness, looking over to Marius slightly during this thought. The harmlessness of it seemed to fade for her upon the announcement of their apparent future dating, which she took to slight offense. Exhaling slowly, her vision shifted to Yamerugo.

"I don't know either of you and I already want to apologise for her."

She smirked a little in an attempted reassurance to him.

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@pkken I'd still make the flight completely exclusive to while he's in his battle suit, other than that that part's looking better, I'll wait to see what Nightmare and Charlie have to say

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Interacting with @Kalas

"Marius."

He said with a small, flickering wave of his hand. He noticed the girl entering the room, attempting to give a smile if it was noticed. Seeing her fidgeting he frowned a little and his eyes glossed over with a slight red hue. His pen suddenly sprung up on the desk, writing out a message on a piece of paper which tore itself from his book, travelling across the room and laying itself neatly in front of Momo reading:

"
Second row
blue hair
come say hi
"

His vision looked back up to Karma with a smile

"Guess I'm showing my hand already, huh"

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She glanced back around the room, snapping out of her daydream. Catching in the corner of her eye the paper floating her eye twitched a little, already intimidated by quirk use in the classroom, as she shuddered a little to shake it off. Swapping hands to her right, she pressed it into her cheek and rested, revealing a red mark in the shape of a fist on her left cheek. Her gaze swung from person to person as she yawned again, smacking her face a little with her free hand as punishment for staying up too late.

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Interacting with @Kalas

He looked to the guy who sat down next to him, slowly lowering his foot from tying his shoelace. He raised his eyebrows and blinked, a little taken back by his announcing tone, feeling bad that nobody else responded.

"The important thing is we all managed to get this far... Let's try to keep it that way."

He reached into his bag, pulling out a notebook with a pen clipped to the spine ready for any quick starting of class. He slid the pen from the spine, spinning it around his thumb rather intricately, failing every few times he attempted to do so. He appeared to take much care in doing this, however looking back to Karma every now and again not wanting him to think he was ignoring him.

"What did you say your name was?"

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@pkken Yes, being almost identical to a canon character is a big problem. There's going to likely need some large changes to make the character more unique and slightly less super-powered from the get go.

- The amount of force your wind has/weight it can lift is rather high, it'd be better if at least at this stage in the rp that was cut down so you'd be knocking over robots in the entrance exam rather than picking them up

- The intricacy of control your quirk allows over the wind basically makes it a telekenetic quirk, which we do already have a character based around in this rp

- The flying is something I'd recommend against unless the entire battle suit was dedicated to it, like a full wingsuit, without the hard metal defense that seemingly would be clunky and not nearly as aerodynamic as the description suggests.

The main problem is this character is almost identical to a canon character which has opportunity to appear in the rp, so we need some large degree of originality. Do you have any ideas of changes you could make?