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Abraham's was a refreshing strain of douchebaggery that I hope to see again, both in RP's and in real life.


What made it all better was that he did have a circle of peers that was capable of backing him up or gave him some credibility. I'd have to find someone who was willing to have their character team up with a teenage black Joseph Stalin. Otherwise, he's an ass with no friends or reinforcements, or is without something to add weight to his name. Abraham isn't the type of character to be the butt of everyone's jokes like Titus was.
I will accept Titus on the sole condition that a tattooed girl with an overactive shadow bullied the hell out of him back in Detroit.


I'm heartbroken that there'll be no Throwback Thursday to Abraham.
I think it is terrible and unfair that someone as filthy as you gets to occupy my rightful place in the roleplay.

Just kidding. What you've got on the appearance is a good start. We're in the casual section, so I figure it would normally be deemed appropriate. I prefer advanced, but that's just because of the standard I hold myself to. If you want to expand more upon the appearance, take into consideration: body type, weight, figure, curvature, her poise, the scars and otherwise minor details that you might normally not notice, but in reality would influence you unconsciously how you would perceive a person. Let's say I were to make an unkempt 16 year old boy. Obviously he isn't old enough to grow a beard or some respectable lower face stubble, but I could describe the patchy, unorganized strands of hair coming from his chin, or the untrimmed fuzz on the far sides of his upper lip. I could probably describe sweat stains on the armpits of his shirt from working in the garage, or the cuts and calluses on his fingers. How he comes across a few inches shorter than he really is because of how he slouches. His eyes are red with irritation from his constant rubbing because his contacts are a size too big. There's a small chip in his buck tooth because his older brother throws tools at him.

It is very possible to write stories just be writing details about your character's appearance. You seem to have a bit of that in your sheet right now; I can see that she was probably part of a mid-to-upper class family from her hygiene and capability of affording braces - but obviously, it is not just mid-to-upper class people who can afford braces and keep themselves clean. As it is right now, I think it would meet the qualifications of a casual roleplay. This is just my advice to you if you really want to improve. :-)
The secret phrase is actually "git gud". Only after you git gud are you good.

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When I get rid of some of these scrubs, senpai.


Wind blows the hair out of my face, and the leaves roll past my trench coat.

"The scrubs... they will never leave. They are here to stay, and I will never know true love..."
When is the next opportunity for sheets so that I can foist my assets upon your tender bodies?
Between work and house packing, my time is stretched thin. I'll try to make a post within a day, but no promises.
Nickolas, I swear to THE Jesus, if there's any more drama on this OOC I'm gonna go all booty warrior on you.
u rang?
You totally missed the point. Feel free to stay, just practice a little self control. It's a bit easier online than it is in person, because words don't just slip out. You are in 100% control of what you communicate in writing and online messaging.
I think you're misinterpreting depression. Depression is more of a void than it is "feeling very sad". With depression, there's no room for sadness. It's a lack of feeling, a sort of cold numbness. Given the inexplicable whirl of emotions you're feeling, I'm more inclined to think your emotions are more inclined to be interpreted as hormonal. It's a result of adolescence and is to be expected. You can stay; just tone down the theatrics a bit. I'm personally not a big fan of the "deliberate refusal to cooperate" jokes exhibited on the last page, but that's just me and my cup of tea. I can't speak for anyone else here. I also want to add that I, too, have suffered sexual abuse - but I offer no excuses.
Bless your heart.
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