[quote=HellsGardenKeeper] Hmmm...As in what am I looking for from it? More so then just a simple love story with a tale of betrayal weaved into it, I think it be rather nice to focus on the later part of the plot, focusing on the extent and consequences they're willing to do and face to achieve their goal, whether it be a shared one or individual ones; to test the limits and boundaries of how much they truly trust and want to be with their partner or if they're willing to destroy them as well in the end to get what they want. [/quote] Ohh All my stories have twists - keep in mind there are just raw ideas, more so with betrayal loves trust. With that worked out, what kind of gender/race did you want to play as well as role?