@Shadowcatcher

You have 1 more point for profession stats.

The armor is absolutely beautiful! It looks very feminine and suits your character's fighting style and personality, in my opinion. Please add whether its Leather armor (lowest defense/protection overall, highest movement speed) OR Light metal armor (medium armor which offers better protection than leather, movement speed is somewhat hindered) OR Heavy armor (Highest defense/protection, slows down movement considerably)

Message record crystals can be reused infinitely, so there's really no need for more than one.

Everything else looks good!

@Lennon

I'm loving Torvald so far. He seems like an interesting character, to say the least. I love how you described his personality and biography. Can't wait to see it completed, stats and all.