[quote=Expllo] Looks ok? I mean, I'd say go ahead and RP and just don't fight like Abi said. Few things that confuse me, probably just me, but...What up with that Hollow mask? ._.Second, the backstory. I might need to sleep and get food, but I don't understand the Asauchi part. She got one, then hid it away until now??? [/quote] Ah yeah, changes it a little to make more sense. It is a WIP but those are the bare bones. So it should make sense now, I hope. As for the mask, that was just something I added due to finding a picture like that heh.