[quote=AliceZaru]
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Hey Alice, thanks for your interest but I'm unable to accept your character for a few reasons.

First, we prefer [b]all character applications via PM.[/b] It helps clear out the already cluttered OOC a bit.

As stated in the OP, we aren't accepting any more seniors, and even then, Alyssa's age doesn't add up. It would be impossible for her to be in 12th grade as a 15 year old without skipping a few grades. Also, if her birthday is on May 7th, 1997 she would be 17 years old.

Second, "commoner" wouldn't be her social class. She would fit in gifted, if anything, but even then, I'm having a hard time believing that she has never lost a game. A commoner would [i]not[/i] skip two grades, one would even be a stretch. Alyssa is way too smart in an unrealistic way. Chess champions have to train their way to foresee their opponent's moves, to understand how to counter them. Even a genius would lose a few games, especially their first. 

Alyssa is also a little too flat in terms of personality. So she plays games, she's way too good at them. So what? The only impression that I get from her is that she's a genius gamer whom everyone hates. There's no how, or why, and again, I think that its a bit unrealistic.

Finally, there's various grammatical errors and such throughout the entire CS which makes it hard to read. It make me question whether you will fit the 'high-casual' standard that I hold for this RP. I'm not a grammar nazi, but I do require good grammar to make things easier to read and comprehend.