I'm on my phone atm, but thought I should just write some stuff real quick. ACCEPTED! Mai, Lily, and Rebel. Pending: Joseph Gaia -Seeing as you made the only male character (until I make my own) I was compelled to accept. However, your CS feels a bit half baked. Cool concept with the ruins, but I didn't get the feel that he was speaking to me in the way the others did. Also, I don't mind a few typos, but it was kinda hard to read. For example, your last sentence 'dog type pokemon excellent trackers they are.' Should be rephrased 'Dog type pokemon are excellent trackers.' Also erase the stuff in astericks. Regan: Also feels a bit underdeveloped.