@Nathan:

First of all your KG is not a KG, it is a jutsu. Your KG should only state the basic power you have, which in this case is making snow and then Snow release: Avalanche would be in your jutsu list. Though I find that an extremely strong jutsu for a Genin so if you want to use it I suggest you tone it down for now.

Kousetsu (snowfall): does this require constant chakra to keep it snowing? Either way I would rank it D, not E.

I'm not okay with * very good chakra control. and * Large chakra reserve, The general rule is that you can't have both especially not as a Genin because it will mean that you burn to your Large chakra reserves very slowly.

I would nag about the fact that we already had a Fujiwara clan in the RP, but since that guy left, its fine. 

Oh and your appearance isn't working for me, but that could also be me.