[quote=Meeky]
The best way to improve your writing abilities is to keep writing. Emulate others, draw upon what you like from their techniques, and you'll improve over time, likely developing your own style. Just keep writing and you'll be fine.

The one thing I'd watch for is your grammar and such. Also, always keep in mind what the limitations of the era are. Battlefield communications in the days of yore, especially the medieval era, were pretty awful; you didn't have radios, and you couldn't just yell across the battlefield to a subordinate. Thus, most orders were short and simple, and the tactics you use walking into a battle are usually going to be pretty straightforward. (I.E.: a general may tell his officers to "charge the enemy at the signal" or "move to their flank and attack" and leave the rest to their discretion, because you can't predict everything the enemy will do.)

In an upcoming battle Erimir will be in, I'll be trying to give a good idea of what sort of chaos the medieval battlefield may have had.
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thanks for the feedback, i knew that i'm always bad at grammar,
i wonder is warcraft universe is counted as medieval, excluding magic and stuff though...