@shadow - Kiyomi's perception skill is lower than Richard's stealth. She should not have been able to detect him.

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By the way, Alice and Shadow! A hint for you two: To avoid such short posts when interacting, use titanpad or even PMs to interact, then put it all together in a single post and bam. You have a sizeable post with a lot of interaction c:
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An excellent idea. 

@Lone - Your opening was absolutely beautiful.

...why am I commenting on all of these things? *goes back to reading*

Also. I have a couple of questions about Kiyomi's orange cursor.