[quote=Marrow]
 An annoying beeping sound that was... why is it so dark... ugh I wish it would stop, where is it coming from anyway. I look around. Its hard as if my neck is stuck, i can't turn my head. I start to panic and can;t really remember what happened. The last thing I remember was that I was with Miller saving people, then a hard cracking noise and then... nothing, I don't know. God, make it stop please! Muffled voices can be heard. I can't really distinguish who they are and what they are saying. the only clear sounds are my thought and the annoying beeping sounds. I can't see, I can't move.
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[b]Alyssa[/b] I have no objection to you writing a post up for her prior to being wounded, and that was part of seeing if you could do it as I previously stated. However this... you're breaking some serious medical laws here. Prior to the crash you were bouncing around the ship much like everyone else, then you were running around helping people and after that you were exposed to space. I am afraid she will not survive, that will allow FallenReaper something to do...

[quote=Marrow]
The ship duck beneath a large chunk of meteor. 'Shield's charging!' Alarm bells were ringing. I quickly load up the rail guns but because there is no distinguished target I need to aim them myself. 'Weapons ready, changing controls to manual!' I start reading the movement s of our ship and shoot the meteors to the best of my ability. but Logan suddenly dodged the other way than I predicted. I missed a shot. a large rock hit the ship rocking the bridge. I feel a stinging pain in my neck. I slowly open my eyes, my head hurts like hell. the light hurts my eyes, where the hell am I, I look around the. the room is amazingly white, wounded people are lying everywhere, was I at the medical bay? What in the world happened?[/QUOTE]

Excuse me but... what? Actually.... What? First how do you think the bloody weapon systems work? They just go "Oh look that is an enemy" which is the case sometimes. However you can put in the details for enemy targets specifically and it isn't as if there aren't other weapon control folk that can target as well... Also debris not meteors. Debris makes it substantially more.. troublesome. As there could be anything in it!

Also what is with this, head banging the desk?

[quote=Sep]In the bridge things were settling down, as people who were wounded were healed by the Tok'ra and then suddenly out of nowhere sparks began flying out the separate consoles. Screens flickered and went black, obviously something was wrong with several of the smaller conduits and the damage had not been picked up by the sensors for when it was being re-routed from the main conduit system. The screen systems began to flash and the warnings began blaring again. 

Lights flickered and then suddenly, the panel beside the chair to the weapons console exploded sending the occupant in that chair sailing to the other side of the room. He emitted a brief groan before he passed out, blood pooling over the floor.[/quote]

You were flung clearly across the room, have been wounded slightly but not enough to remove you from critical condition or to wake up. So what is with you waking up? Do you read other peoples posts or do you just make it up as you go along? 

He will also be having a fatal incident. 

If you want to continue to play with us make a character in a non-command position. After reading all this and weighing the facts I do not feel that in this particular roleplay you are capable of it.