I in no way have GM control, but I'ma just leave this here.

[quote=Ink Blood]
The past makes you who you are. What sort of events made you the one you are? Do some events mean more to you than others? Did you have a good or a bad life?
My birth family was slaughtered by the Tusken Raiders of Tatooine when I was but a babe, but then the Tuskens took me in and raised me as their own, and it is because of this that I wear a mask to conceal my face. They taught me their ways of fighting and of life. I still hold on to those ways. My Tusken tribe was taken from me as well, though, when a band of mercenaries came through and killed them for their slaughter of my previous home; I was around ten years of age then. Thinking I was just another Tusken child, the mercenaries turned their guns on me as well, but in that moment where I saw my life flash before my eyes I screamed in terror, but the sound waves manifested through the Force and pushed all the mercenaries back, away from me. Not knowing what I did, I ran for my life, taking one of the last Banthas and escaping to the closest city. When I got to the city, I managed to stow away on a smuggler’s ship that was unguarded at the time. I hid away in one of their crates and was unloaded on Korriban along with their cargo. I managed to slip out of the cargo and away from the port unnoticed while the smugglers talked prices over with their client. Once on Korriban, I spent a few years as an orphan, barely staying alive before I heard about the Sith Empire and first approached it hopeful to join the military and have somewhere to sleep and eat regularly, but I was recruited by the Sith Order instead, and I soon found out what I did to the mercenaries who came after me was a scream powered by the Force. The Order took me in and trained me in the ways of the Force. I showed an aptitude for studying the ruins and the history of the Sith of old as well as the more mental aspects of the Force, such as concealing my presence and assaulting my enemies’ minds, but that doesn’t mean I didn’t show any skill with a lightsaber. I trained in the Makashi style because of my aptitude with the mental aspects of the Force, because the Makashi style is less offensive and allows the user to be dexterous instead of using pure strength in battle as well as allowing the user to be tactical about their strikes in battle. After sixteen years of training and study, I was promoted to the rank of Knight in the Sith Empire. My role is to further the Empire’s knowledge on the Sith of old by conducting archaeological digs and finding as many artifacts as possible and then study them. [/quote]

1- If you got away on a [i]Bantha[/i] the Mercenaries must have been Hutts.
2- If you had force aptitude on Korriban you would likely have heard off the Sith Order a while before a couple of years passed.
3- You would have taken an interest into history it isn't really something you can be naturally good at.
4- 16 Year old Knight. Mhm.
5- If you work on Archaeology why would you be on the ship?

I didn't read anything else so could not comment on it.

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