Okay Chanda, 99% of your character is fine, the only thing that doesn't sit well with me is the back-up air container that allows him to survive force choking. I think while being force choked, the issue is not being able to breathe, not that there isn't enough air. Other than that, he looks great, and hilariously fun. Alright everyone, with that, I am officially working on the first IC post to get us rolling. Keep an eye out!