@Nathan:

It seems you didn't quite understand my point before. 

* above average chakra control.
* above average chakra reserve,

Is what your CS says right now. However what I tried to tell you before is that these two can never be equally high when you are a Genin. You can't have both at a high level, you have to choose one. If you want high chakra reserves that is fine, put that in and then set the chakra control to either normal or low and improve that during your training IC, thus that way gaining better chakra control as well as getting some nice experience under your belt.

The rest of the jutsu look fine to me though I would like a max range on Yukino ririisu: Yukino Haka (snow release: snow tomb).