[quote=Prince]
I just proof read your current history. You jump from three villages, you claimed to have been trained by the Amekage at a time that an Amekage couldn't even chronologically be alive. There were Kage in existence at the specific time your character was said to be training with one; that would have been during the Reign of Sai. I seriously feel like you have taken no time to consider this setting. I'm going to afford you one opportunity to revamp your entire CS before I simply ask you to leave.
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I think I changed enough of her history and removed the OP techniques, I hope this is suitable to you.