[quote=LillyDove]
I think I changed enough of her history and removed the OP techniques, I hope this is suitable to you.
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It's really not.. I see no efforts for you to be part of this roleplay. Your character is a [b]generic[/b] Naruto-themed character with no single quality that stands out to place her in this setting. I don't feel like you understand what is trying to be done here, and I surely don't think you realize your history contradicts itself.

Her father is a semi-wealthy Genjutsu master. Means he's a Shinobi. Why couldn't her mother afford healthcare? Also, you use generic medical terms without even knowing what they mean. If she was afflicted by a disease caused by a pandemic, she wouldn't be chronically ill. Her illness would be acute and severe. 

I seriously cannot emphasize enough that your character is not built for this roleplay.