@Gorgenmast [center][img]http://uproxx.files.wordpress.com/2012/05/deadwood.jpg?w=650[/img] Well Done Indeed[/center] And you'll be happy to know, you totally got me with that anime pic and modern sniper rifle. GM jimmies successfully rustled. You'd be surprised, though, how often I've seen crap like that in a game. Once had someone submit a pic of an emaciated, sparkly anime girl with a five hundred pound claymore as an elven archer in low magic grimdark fantasy RP. I think he just liked her eyes or something.... creepy. Seriously, though, that is an excellent write up and I really appreciate the attention to historical detail when it comes to the plains tribes as well as the incorporation of the time line events into the backstory. The only thing I can suggest for this character is you determine what tribal languages you know if any. They might come in handy later on. Also see if you can't find a historical picture. If nothing matches what you're envisioning then use a picture of the rifle your character uses since it is a defining part of his background.