[quote=KaBling]
DragonBeastMode: Level 1 seems pretty low for a friend. In fact, I expect them to be... just born, if they were to be level 1. However, through tricks of my imagination, I can partially see why they died.I would go out to claim your character's a Mary Sue, but then I'd be hypocritical; in a future RP, a character of mine named [REDACTED] will do basically just that. Try not to get into any competition with him/her.Also, we already have a Dratini. This won't deny your app, but it is discouraged to use a Pokemon that's already being used by another RPer.The only problem so far is that... well, mutations; you're gonna have to explain them.Scraggy: You need to split up your paragraph. I'm not kidding. You actually have to split it up, otherwise your posts become near-unreadable.
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Rewrote some parts of it, and added some splits.