So like, Deadly Fairy, I've been given the honor to address you ( though forgive me for being so late! I'm such a mess, ehehe... ).There's just a few things that I'm going to be listing that will aid you in having acceptable profiles, that is if I may. You don't have to read this, but I would advise if you do so just so we can accept you and have you in our role-play~

> Honey would technically be in University. That was kind of something me and the GM realized while working on profiles, so it isn't much of an error at all actually! Simply just replaced "college" as "university". Small, simple, and good.
> He doesn't have much of personality written down. Don't get me wrong, it's still there, but to write a bit more on his character would be nice. Just in your own words.
> You could still include him as a Host Club member -- he would just be making a few visits now and then is all.

> Kioku time. Let's first start off that, well, why did she move to Hawaii? It never hurts to have a little bit of detail.
> A bit of spelling and grammar is off, along with run on sentences. Would you perhaps have a spell check on you? Or perhaps run it through a word document and see any corrections you can make solely based off of that.
> Since the current family business may only solely land you in D, I would recommend not making it only a flower shop, but a gardening supplies seller! I would be more sure about this, however the GM is not present and I have homework to do so... Nevertheless, to make the company seem a little more broader, try adding something like that. Perhaps it started off as a flowers-only company, then branched out to gardening supplies and owning many plots of land to plant and grow pretty flowers! Unless you're okay with being in class D. I assume you would like to be as high-top as you can, however.
> That's all I really got actually. This is just an extra, intimidating bullet. What a pretty bullet. Don't trust bullets.