[quote=shivershiver]
Awh man, looks like I have some revising to do. I guess now would be a good time to say I'm very familiar with Star Wars universe outside of the films. If I have any more mistakes, just lemme know!
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I am reading and aside from that little tidbit about the while Jedi, I mostly like it. So don't worry about it too much.

The Jedi could've been exiled due to brutality against gangsters or something similar. 

[quote=Giygas]
When are we starting?
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well, I would like to see a bit more applications to some Arcs.

Which reminds me. You may want to think about which Arc you'll fit into the most. I'll release details about them shortly.