[quote=Expllo] Well, I really don't tend to give a shit about History's and the thing's I do have problems with are misunderstandings or nit-picks....Whatever it is here, I'm not sure.She thinks her mother abandoned her at birth? I don't see the logic from what else you wrote:She couldn't have thought that considering her mother left a month before her father died, and afterwards became a thief. So obviously she stuck around for atleast a while O.o and if she was so quick to go after her daughter when she went missing, why didn't she help when her daughter wasn't doing well and had no one looking after her? Surely the mother would have gotten word of her lovers death and would have tried helping her daughter?Abilities:1. Mist generation: the Kubikiribōchō generates mist and fog, reducing visibility and allowing the user stealth and terror tactics. (3 post use, 4 post Cooldown)I guess that's fine, unless someone has a problem with the cooldown/PDs? Butchering Blade: Kubikiribōchō's blade glows with its user's Reiatsu and it unleashes a massive strike (1 post use, 5 post cooldown)A strike as in an arc of energy, or...???Increased Strength by 10 percent (4 post use, 4 post cooldown)So....Does it help her attack be stronger, more durable...??? Depending on that I'll get to the cooldowns.Frozen fog: the Fog suddenly becomes a circle, and turns the opponent within the circle to ice. (1 post use, 4 post cooldown)As freezing someone completely would be too OP and would be capable of killing anyone, I say at least freeze the bottom half of them as in up to the ankles or legs. Also would suggest a longer cooldown. [/quote] Ah. (Uses Madara's English voice because it's so friggin smooth yet deep) Well. I see. To answer your concerns, yes, an arc, vertical, of energy. And as to the increased strength, it's more along the lines of her durability whilst attacking. The Frozen fog thing...that...was actually taken out. It shouldn't be there; I apologise. Finally; I'll rewrite the history.