[quote=LillyDove]Her mother eventually found her, in tears hiding under a tree and decided to stay with her until she was alright. Okani told her mother that it was all her fault, they would never have left if she didn't take to Genjutsu and her mother promptly told her that in order to honor his sacrifice that she would need to become a Genjutsu master in Konoha. However her confidence had been dashed and she wasn't sure that she could do that, but her mother insisted. 

Em rolling in the Academy and trying hard to measure up, failing some of the times as she wasn't a born fighter, being one who preferred to keep to the side lines. She graduated when she was 10 being the top Genjutsu user in her class, figuring out that if she needed to keep in the side lines than her own Jutsu's were needed, she set to work on developing them. 

In the next coming years, she perfected her three Rose Jutsu's and went into the finals of the Chuunin exam, despite her hard work, she became a Chuunin the next year and it took her five years to become a Genjutsu master at Joinin Level.[/quote]

You are only [i]slightly[/i] better at this point. It has only been like a year and a half since the fall of Sai. Literally, there were [b]NO[/b] Shinobi Academies. She could not have graduated to become a Genin. There were no Chuunin exams. She could not have been promoted. Shinobi earned their ranks in the Resistance.

[quote=Prince]Fifteen years past. Most clans were purged, shinobi were all-but a myth and the people had been lulled into their new lives. Sai ruled each major village using a clone of himself, and was working on improving his society at this point.[/quote]

I may not have screamed it out at you, but it is literally stated in the description that Shinobi were no longer being trained. Others have came and asked me what the time frame is, so there is no reason you could not have. I do not feel like you are reading my setting and I don't care how much [i]work[/i] you think you're putting into your character, it's only a fraction of the work I put into formatting this specific setting - to which it feels like you're ignoring.

You are not designing a character for Birth of a Better Generations. You are designing a character fit to the general Naruto theme, and this isn't a general Naruto roleplay. This has more elements to it that you cannot just ignore, and for that reason I am no longer allowing you to make a Jounin. I feel that you have overwhelmingly failed to meet the criteria I have repeatedly stated, use the example given in an actual approved Jounin or even follow my advice.

Additionally, why would she blame herself for the death of her brother due to learning genjutsu? That makes no sense. There are a bunch of reasons to self-blame, but you didn't even give me one. It seems like you were just attempting to add an emotional layer to the story that was simply weak.
 
Overall, she is not approved. Overall, I'm getting frustrated. I will not hold your hand and help you through creating a character. I will help you with any questions asked, but you haven't even made that effort. My final verdict is that you will make a genin, like everyone else, and if that is not suitable for you, you may leave.