@Geoffrey, Indeed XD Many things, such as

1. The biggest I noticed XD If you've ever played Fallout you should certainly know how the 'traits' work XD like 'small frame', making you more agile but easier to cripple when hit, or the wild wasteland trait, which is actually pretty harmless and just 'spices up the wasteland'.

2. I can't actually complain about the name XD Mainly because I haven't got a clue about Zebra Naming Schemes aside from that they tend to sound 'exotic'.

3. Zebra's already have a real BITCH of a reputation, thanks to the whole 'causing the apocalypse' thing, being the ones that Showered Equestria with bale-fire missiles, sure they still got even worse from Equestria's own super weapons, but there's still no shortage of individuals that hate them with a vengeance. Throw out one that's got 'freaky reversed colors' [I don't mind that btw] and even other Zebra's are gonna be weird around them... Good thing you didn't give him 'red' stripes XD

4. His Skills, is that like... Propane and propane accessories :D HAHAH! I couldn't resist... I suppose some of this is my fault for assuming everyone who'd even look at Fallout: Equestria must certainly have experience with Fallout itself... I'd recommend you at least browse the wiki XD There's a pre-determined set of skill categories, and similarly a few new ones for Anything 'pony' XD It'd not like it's blasphemy or anything, but it helps to 'know', lest certain things in the RP ammount a smack in the face from being confusing.

5. For one, Equestria doesn't have 'super mutant' [The Changelings I setup are the closest thing to actual 'mutants' really XD], The closest thing to 'super mutant' would be the unity Alicorns, but they operate in 'wings of 3 and have Alicorn magic to play with, You're lucky if you can so much as 'run the fuck away' XD And with a luck of '1'... well =D You're more liable to get snapped in half if you're alone with em XD

6. I got no big issue with his 'shopy' story, It could give him a fairly different reason to go along with the little caravan, and more to lose if something goes wrong XD

7. Also, since you mentioned it at the beginning of your history =P If you stick around, I'm going to ask you to be less 'lazy' as you put it XD There's a few 'quality' issues with that back-story, not even 'spelling' issues really, though I can 'benefit of the doubt' my ass off, I will have to enforce the rules I've set if posting quality is consistently low