This is what I have so far, I hope it's up to scratch. Please tell me what needs to be changed and I'll have a go at making it so. [center][b][i]- Name -[/i][/b] Damien Perar [b][i]- Gender -[/i][/b] Male [i][b]- Age and birthday -[/b][/i] 27 years old, born the 11th of June of the year 1274 [i][b]- Origin -[/b][/i] He is of low nobility, born from the Lesser House of Perar [i][b]- Length and build -[/b][/i] 6'0" with a slender build [i][b]- Weight -[/b][/i] 185lbs [i][b]- Sexuality -[/b][/i] Heterosexual [/center] ------------------------ [center] [i][b]- Appearances -[/b][/i] [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/QvDpzV9.jpg?1[/IMG] [/center] ------------------------ [center] [i][b]- Occupation -[/b][/i] Damien has the head for politics and as such he has made it his goal to make his way to a seat on the senate. [i][b]- Favorite phrase/saying -[/b][/i] "Treachery is noble when aimed at tyranny" [i][b]- Favorite Food -[/b][/i] Cherry's are his favorite food and he is often seen still nibbling their stalks [b][i]- Favorite Weather and Season -[/i][/b] Winter and snow [i][b]- Patron God/Goddess -[/b][/i] Araos, God of Intelligence and Knowledge & Irtan, God of Courage and Chance/Luck [/center] ----------------------- [center] [i][b]- Personality -[/b][/i] Despite being of low nobility and thus not being granted the highest education available Damien is a rather intelligent individual whom has learnt his way through life thus far, he could be described as an intellectual who spends hours reading books and the like but it when he comes into contact with people when Damien really shines. He has learnt through multiple methods most prominently examining himself and his own personality how to manipulate others and to play people off on one another. He is a very ambitious person and he intends to use his future power and influence to improve the standing of house Perar and to catapult himself even further. On the face of it Damien is a polite and hard working member of house Perar, he is generally one to make a joke and enjoys toying with others and deliberately putting people off balance. He is similar to his sister in many ways, as he knows that she isn't the paragon that everyone seems to believe. However being her brother Damien is rather protective over her and is looking forward to the day that their paths cross not just as siblings, but as rivals. Damien has never seen the allure of courage and fighting his opponent head on, he sees the fight in the shadows that is played between minds to be the most important and honorable fight. [i][b]- History -[/b][/i] Damien was always interested in the ideals and inspirations of others. He always wondered about his fathers desires and why he was content with being an servant for the high house of Rynir. His father was a good man and Damien respected him but he did not share the bakers ambitions, no Damien aimed much higher when imagining his own destiny and after years of education and teaching himself in the only library available to him he was able to give himself at least a chance of reaching those impossible dreams he had set for himself so many years prior. Damien is focused on getting himself a seat in the senate, something he sees as essential if he wants to continue along his current path and hopefully manage to make the name of Perar great. With only his intelligence he often seeks travel to the capital so he can learn more about the government and the senators themselves as he realizes that if he one day does manage to gain a place among their ranks he will need allies and he will have to know whom to trust and whom to manipulate. [i][b]- Theme song -[/b][/i] [Youtube]KylMqxLzNGo[/Youtube] [/center] --------------------- [center] [i][b]- Clothing and/or armor -[/b][/i] Damien generally walks around in tight fit leather clothing with the etched designs of house Perar, these are his everyday clothes which most people see him wearing. He does also posses armor but hasn't yet been involved in a conflict in which he needed to wear it. With red shaded leather and chain mail stained a dark reddish colour and with lines of gold in its lining. It is a very fine set of armor and whilst he doesn't have the time to devote to his physical training he hopes he can live up to its appearance if he ever needs to wear it. [i][b][u]- Tools and weapons -[/u][/b][/i] ======= Damien has little need for swords or bows as he does most of his fighting in the quarters of nobles. He does have a small dagger that was bestowed upon him by his father when he was the age of five. He has kept it by his side ever since and it can often be seen strapped to his belt or somehow fixed to his waist. Whilst he doesn't carry it around with him Damien does have a sword that is placed with his armor in his personal quarters but it is rarely taken from it's sheath let alone used. [/center] --------------------------------------- [center] [b][u]- Skill/Abilities -[/u][/b] Skilled Orator Tactician Manipulator Low-level fighting skills Can ride a horse Superior observation skills --------------------------------------- [i][b][u]- Traits -[/u][/b][/i] Stern Driven Underhanded Joker lighthearted [/center]