[quote=Nimda]
His mouth looks like one.
[/quote]

Heh.
[quote=Nimda]
That's not it, the problem was the lack of buildup. It was too fast, and we weren't totally sure he was dead.
[/quote]

Exactly. Even though when I wrote Soren's death it [i]seemed[/i] quick, the writing itself built up to it until his death really struck you.
[quote=souleaterfan320]
ill go back and edit it now.
[/quote]

It's over already, though.