DeathstrokeSW,

First I want to welcome you into the RP. At least, for showing interests. A second and more warm welcome awaits you when you're accepted. So I will just review your CS now.

So far I don't see much of a problem. However, the clan/bloodline is set on unknown. If you wished that he discovers a KG later or that he is part of a KG clan, than you need to state so. A KG-less clan isn't a problem, but the sudden appearance of somebody gaining a KG isn't something we want to see. Not that the character in story will know this as writers need to separate OOC and IC knowledge from each other.

Also, if you have time, I would say to fix the link of your jutsu. That and I want to talk with you in private regarding your parental blocking. It will become a bit of a nuisance if you can't get access to the board while there is a lot of information stored there that we use. Its nice that Alice was willing to send you a pm with some history, but I hope that you will try to fix this. For that, I want to talk a bit to see if we can think of a solution together.

[quote=AlterNathan]
we all wrote it at the same time
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I thought that GM's were used to answer questions. Alice likely refers to that we had some reviewing problems in the past, so its best to let a GM answer a question. Unless its a simple question and you're 120% sure you know the answer. Like if you are allowed to have a tanto.

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[quote=AlterNathan]
(also: what about hydrification technique?)
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That is more or less a hidden than a technique. I thought some were able to do it, but it depends on the character as a whole before I can give an answer on it.