Nathan I honestly see no changes what so ever.

You didn't answer Lesli questions/demands:
- Which war?
- You didn't remove the "probably the fastest of Amegakure"
- You hardly gave ANY extra detail on your jutsu

Also pet peeve of mine. Fuuton: Oxindo Oxooku (wind style: Windwalk) This name canNOT work. The Japanese don't have the letter x in their alphabet so using it in a Japanese name is rubbish.