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Made some edits and ill vCard omelette the post either tonight or tomorrow morning since I work till 11:00 pm my time.
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I recommend to look at some other Genin Cs's as example mate. :) 
Though I can't accept those custom techniques.
Genins aren't allowed to start with a 3 tomo'd sharingan or two chakra natures in that case. That and not only for you but people.

Linking Jutsu properly, as in the other CS's would be great. Really really great. Thanks

If any help, here is a CS of a normal starting Genin :

[url=http://narutorotg.proboards.com/post/398]Example 1[/url]
[url=http://narutorotg.proboards.com/post/630]Example 2[/url]