[quote=Demon Shinobi]
Okay really not sure what to say here. I read it over. The overall background and character is fine, but the magic is iffy. First off, Raw magic like this(to my understanding) is way way WAY strong and in most cases overpowered compared to other magic abilities. And this seems like a form of magic utilizing raw magic. You seem to have done a fair job making the power balance out a bit, but still... I don't think it works too well. SO! While i think the character is fine I don't think I can accept his magic. Also... while it isn't in the rules I don't think Kitty wanted too many Lost magic in the RP. So I'm not sure she will allow another lost magic. This doesn't mean nobody else will get another lost magic. But for now I think she wants to cap it.
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Is there any way I can make the magic more acceptable then? Like, making it not raw magic? I'd be fine with making it elemental if I have to.