[quote=FortunesFaded]
Wow, you're fast! Just a heads up, I edited the crops on the individual fiefdom - found that it was innacurate when I posted since I didn't take the city dwellers into account. Should be fixed now.
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I'm already online, I've made sheets of my own, and read 8 other players' sheets now, so it's starting to come easier. 

Your army is off. The upkeep of the legionaries would be 1 for their pay, and 5 for their upkeep, making the total 6. 6x500= 3,000. Pay needs to factored in to the bowmen as well. Also, upkeep is paid seasonally, not annually.

Your fief populations are off as well. You need to subtract the people in your towns from the fief they're located in.

But with that crop fix, all other things are good. Just fix those things, and you're added to the accepted list.