Welcome to Ex and Sixsmith is in order. [quote=Ozerath] Good to hear, both on spear count and the IC progress. Thael is pretty much complete, barring some minor peaks. I've made a few updates if you want to check back. [/quote] See if you can describe or find a picture for Thael's shield. You have to clearly state, in-character, when your Limit Break buffs everyone else. It should have a visual appearance, so think about how you are going to describe that. "While I Draw Breath" must have some kind of drawback when Thael is pushing the limits. Perhaps some of his other abilities are disabled, as those spirits focus their attention on the spirits that form this ability—the spirits are, perhaps, assisting each other with this ability. Other than that, things look real solid. [quote=Adorabadass] I bolded my headers. :P [/quote] Excellent Edit: those are some nice ideas for character relations! [quote=Archangel89] Prisk I have finished my character...it is now awaiting your thoughts. [/quote] This looks really nice and clear. See if you can find an image for Aaron, but if you deliberately chose not to have one, then that is fine. You can always expand on things if you want to, while you wait for everyone else and the in-character to begin.