Alright, time for CS feedback! :D Draco: I think it is well versed and you aren't going overboard with the Persona and the story seems very credible for the Beowulf verse, or as I'm just seeing it now after making some quick research, it seems it actually is part of the Beowulf story, you just put it a name. Clever. Ken is in! Noel: What can I tell you? Of course she is in. (And you already told me your fav. Persona game, so I'll let that slide.) chukklehed: Okay, since you are doing that with your Shadow, fleshing the backstory a bit more, then I am okay with it, after all, I didn't really put a minimum of paragraphs in the CS 'cause I figured something like this would happen, just try to flesh out personality and then you're in. AND, you need to give the rules a read. :D So, sorry for the double post and my CS should be up in a bit. Also, accepted character will be put in the Arcana list.