Sorry I've been away. Between the Guild being picky and my business, I didn't have the time to do anything. Especially log on, apparently...

Anyways, character review time:

Though the use of first-person is done rather well here, I find it a bit confusing. I've always been a third-person advocate for roleplaying as it allows things to be more clear. So I hope that isn't a prelude to using first-person when the IC gets going, because that will get confusing fast. But anyways, in all seriousness, I have a few things for ya.

1: She is stated to have the surname of Miyoshi. Is that just a coincidence that means nothing? Note: one of the established characters comes from a noble Miyoshi family.
2: I can guess why she would tag along on the journey (to learn about the Oni, I presume) but her actual role is unclear to me. What would she be doing?