[quote=So Boerd]
As I recall, the rules say the town's population is drawn from the fief in which it is located. Only if the town population exceeds fief population may you draw population from another fief.
[/quote]

Indeed, So Boerd is right. I noticed that on your sheet, but forgot to mention it until So Boerd reminded me to mention it just now, so now I must mention it: the population of that fief is too high. You must subtract 5,000 from the total population of that fief, not include the population of the town into the fief.

So Boerd, you win a gold star for making me remember to do that.

*pins a 'freakin medal on So Boerd's chest*

@ Nex: I do hate saying this, since as VoiD has proven, I tend to miss some shit, but I detect no flaws in your NS. I assume you spent 1 point to convert it into family points, no? Adding you to the accepted list.