@Eklispe

Okay, my review :

1. Please add Ice at the nature releases. I was almost going to say an instant no, until I read he has the Ice release. You need to put that he has it, cause a genin without a KG and two natures at the start? Not going to be accepted.

2.The skills/abilities are too high for a starting genin. I am really going to think about writing something guide people on that. 

-High stamina
High skills aren't allowed for a starting genin.

-Good chakra control
Accepted, but keep in mind that his reserves are average then.

-Does well with higher level techniques
No. How is this explained or possible? It has to have a logical reason. Some clans allow characters to learn things at a rapid speed, but it isn't making it easier for them to learn higher level techniques.

-Excellent combat mind
How? Tactics? Elaborate please?

-Ice swords
Not needed here.

-Water prison
Not needed here.

-Sub-par speed
I am wavering about this. You mean high speed? Not going to work for a starting genin.

3. The Ice sword technique is odd. If its deprived from Water Cutting Sword, its not a D ranked technique at all. It is also a bit weird when I noticed this :

Fire(although it is resilient to fire)

So fire can destroy it, but yet it is resilient against fire?

Please not that I ask the question in a manner that may seem blunt, but I am not trying to put you down or such in any kind of manner. My motive with being so blunt is simply to make you think about the points and try to edit them. I do like the history as Kirigakure is kind of the grim place. At least in public. xD