That sill leaves entire posts open to being completely re-written. Take yours as an example. You wrote an action, then I created a response to that action, then you altered the action you initiated, without any prior indication that you would do so, which then will force me to completely re-write the action I took because the circumstances that led to it no longer apply/exist. Basically, you altered things so far back that almost my entire post becomes useless and voided. 

If you write something as a definite event, without using an if statement, that should be exactly how that event happens unless it's physically interrupted by another writer. You were probably trying to create a scenario that was easily variable, but when you used definitive statements like "Meats did this, then followed up with this" and didn't use an if qualifier, you cemented those actions into the story, and they could only be altered by actual physical interruption from me. This is the exact reason we're doing this. To bush off our dueling skills and learn from our mistakes.

So I'd really appreciate it if you could edit the post. I understand that you don't want to lose what you wrote, but it's a difficult post to understand in the first place (im having a hard time wrapping my head around that first move and the narration towards the end) and it IS technically not legal. And the only way for us to improve is to fix our mistakes. That, and I'm a little OCD about my fights. I hate having useless posts cluttering them up, and that's essentially what our previous two posts are right now.