I'm really enjoying all this conversation going on. Thanks to all the people who gave various compliments on the chapter, can't be fucked to quote them each and respond directly. Some of this other stuff though... [quote=Goldmarble] Now the question is: Do I support the Peacemakers because I believe in them, or do I support them purely for their cause of order? If I support them purely for order in the lands outside the city that grew around me, where does my true loyalty lie? Spam, or Rolpia? [/quote] Those questions shall be answered in time. Maaaaybe chapter 4, chapter 5 at the latest. [quote=Lady Squee] I was so heartbroken when my character turned down Toellner's request. All of that history made it hard. Granted, that hasn't really made its way in the story and I dunno if it will. But still. It hurt. T.T I do have a feeling, though, that Toellner is going to be Spam's Robb Stark. I don't like that feeling. [/quote] Seeing as how I have no idea what that history entails, all signs point to no, haha. My story just draws from various Spam history, it's not trying to be an accurate representation of how things are between various people, so lots of things won't ever get mentioned probably. Also, how could Toellner be Robb Stark? He's fighting to put someone else on the throne, so to speak. He's more like the Davos Seaworth to Primez's Stannis Baratheon, or the Loras Tyrell to Primez's Renly Baratheon (although that's got some extra implications), or going further back the Ned Stark to Primez's Robert Baratheon. If anyone could be compared to Robb Stark, mister "I'mma fight for the freedom of my people," it would be Hank. He was even roused to war by an unexpected death, courtesy of story Jorick biting the dust in the first scene. :lol [quote=Zed] Hey now.You're the one who should've been able to fight four on one.I mean, RPG's the one that disappoints me the most.He lost to a fucking frog. [/quote] Not just any frog. He's clearly a badass, or did you not notice that he wrecked a guy with the same abilities as gave four others trouble? [quote=Jster] I await the day when you do not know how to respond because you have a frog at your throat. [/quote] :golfclap [quote=PrimezTime] I guess that makes me Jon Umber. [/quote] See my response to Squee above for a more accurate casting choice. :hehe