[quote=j8cob]
I can't see the picture... 
I like the whole thing except for one little thing: it states that she had been able to go deep into Oni territory before. That's a bit of a stretch in my eyes, though I may be seeing it wrong. Other than that, I like it. Going into Oni territory itself isn't a sin here, but into it is a no-no.
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[url=http://media.animegalleries.net/albums/userpics/64302/crying%20honey-senpai.JPG]
Also, just my twin coppers, but I can see her thinking she went deep into oni territory but what she might think were the big-bads was nothing more than small fries.